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• Artist: Kithandra
• Description: This is a poem I wrote a few months ago. It was a stream of conscious thing that turned into a poem. I only ended up changing one line from the stream of consciousness writing. Comments and Critiques are welcome. Thanks in advance.
• Date: 03/20/2009
• Tags: answers

Who am I to decide what you should do?
Who am I to judge you?
Who are you to judge me?

Why do you do this?
Why do you make this so impossible?
Why do you tease me with happiness?

Why is nothing I do every good enough for you my dear?
Why am I the one always in the wrong?
Why am I the one who always has to give up something?

Are you ashamed of me my dear?
Why do you hide from me when everyone stares?
Are you sure this is what you want?

What am I supposed to think?
What am I supposed to do?

You leave me no choices
You give me no answers

I fumble through the darkness
jumping at every creak.

Yet you stride proudly through the light
Rarely looking back to see if I follow.

You leave me there in the dark
Yet wonder why I cower

You wonder why I cower alone.

Comments

[M0THDVST]

Oh geeze, why do I always travel to reading poetry and listening to contemporary music when I'm sad?
Very wonderful. It hit home, and while it had hurt, it was very strong in calling someone out.

[Kandii Gurll]

x.x that's so sad ;( very good poem 5/5

[Animals grl]

sad and deep. T-T
It's a good poem. 5/5

[blackjack233]

That's so sad! I'm gonna cry....