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Dreams of Invalidity - 2/18/07 (1)
My limping limbs,
Were torn asunder,
But still my mind,
Quite whole did wander,
In the void of endless thought.
Apon endless pathways,
And bridges that I have wrought,
To make clear,
The connection between,
Fluorescent and iridescent,
Lights that blink and lights that glow,
Taking shape into a thousand worlds,
That can only be seen,
When one closes one’s eyes,
And floats in,
This endless space,
Of endless waste,
In an endless case,
Of endless lace,
Around the universe(s),
And dimensions of such,
In the void of endless thought.
In a space unparalleled,
Everywhere else,
As quiet and empty,
As the beady eyes of a mouse,
That crawls about,
In an out of the grout,
In a wall that exists naught,
Anywhere else,
But in the void,
Of endless thought.
And soon the spoon will swoon,
And the dish with it will run,
Away to a fantasy land of tales,
With bales of hay,
on Old McDonald’s Farm,
And mails of grey,
On battlefields of blood,
In the void of endless thought.
And on this may go,
The endless flight of a throw,
Into the space,
With no gravity to hold,
Down the flying,
Gliding,
Soaring into the night,
The endless night,
For there is no light,
In this void,
Save those which float,
In the invalids mind,
Which are worlds in the distance,
Oh so far away,
That any light thrown,
On this darkened matter dissapears,
Into the void of endless thought.
- by rocko11091 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/25/2009 |
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- Title: Dreams of Invalidity
- Artist: rocko11091
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This is one of my true masterpieces. Many people have seemed to take a liking to it. Far more than some of my others, that is. Lets see what the populace of Gaia has to say about it...
As always, I request there be some constructive criticism in any comments. Just something like a specific part you liked about it, something you think could be improved...thats all. Thanks... - Date: 03/25/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Shadow(AoD) - 02/25/2011
- Yeah, maybe shorten it up a little for those who don't like long poems, but I really enjoyed this. It was very deep. I liked how you used more complex words for places where you could have used more common ones, it paints a better picture and makes it more vivid.
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- chance-the-man-slayer - 07/06/2009
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one thang its too long for people with short intention span
but it was vere good - Report As Spam