O` that dreadful girl

• Artist: critic-the-homeless
• Description: people can be annoying cant they?
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: mimic

Theres a girl in my class named mimic.
She was quit the nuiscence- too nicket!*
when i said something,
shed say nothing,
just like i said something.

Tommorow is my day were shell back off.
But when i say she stalks,
She acts like a hawk.

o` that dreadful girl,
o` that dreadful girl,

When you walk beside her,
she starts to sceed.*
When i tell her that she has speed.

o` that dreadful girl,
o` that dreadful girl,

When will she start to be reticent?*






nicket- just a word i made up
meaning annoying


sceed- to talk

reticent- to be quiet

Comments

[critic-the-homeless]

this was my first poem i really ever wrote so...

[UC Poika]

This is perhaps the first of yours I read. Well, keep trying. We all need to learn.