until it's too late

• Artist: Oldies Fan13
• Description: I wrote this and another poem after my cousin died it was sad but the 2 poems are just about how I see life. And please COMMENT I would LOVE to hear your opinions.
• Date: 04/03/2009
• Tags: until late

in a place were you are unknown
were you are unnoticed
a place that seems to hate
wherever you go
no one seems to notice you(until it's too late)

in a place were you are a shadow of nothing
a mere ghost that dies to live
no one seems to know you(until it's too late)

in a place were you don't even know
who you are(until it's too late)

why am i here
no one seems to care(until it's too late)

Comments

[hinatagirl1112]

very... idk how to put it so ill just what i think and get on with rating other poems.... it was good 5/5