timeless

• Artist: xXkawaii-teddy bearXx
• Description: hm...idk this is ________ ^~^
• Date: 04/05/2009
• Tags: timeless

loveless
sleepless
tired and dreamless
hopeless
thoughtless
you the one who brought this...



why is it that im always alone?
so much truth unknown.
no place to call my own.
time to leave i guess.
this world was no good anyway.
but why do i feel this pang were my heart used to be?
i think back to a time wen life made sense but why does everything become so blurry.
its like i have a empty space were all my memoies used to go.
i just don't know anymore.
im so confused.
there's nothing to live for rite?
is it always true that the god die young?
if so why.......?
if you answer me maybe ill go away.
is that wat you want?
want meh to leave??
to disappear so you can live your life?
so im the air that surrounds you and chokes you till you cant breath.
i guess ill go now.
ill fall into an endless dream and sleep in till eternity rite?
you'll wake me
wont you?



can you?




will you?

Comments

[sweet yukki]

awhh
smile sunshine ^^

[kannair]

45

[Eclipse13579]

Nice job, kind of a morbid subject, but you did a good job with it. I do hav a few suggestions. 1. We're not IMing, take some time to fix your spelling and grammar errors, it makes it hard to stay interested. 2. " think back to a time wen life made sense but why does everything become so blurry" try hitting return between "Sense" and "But" it will really make the poem go more smoothly. Good Luck.

[JimmyFREDV]

Cheer up!!