the old oak tree

• Artist: banana_berryxxlolipopxx
• Description: its what i wrote when my bf broke up with me. it was a semi-finalist in a national poem contest.
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: theoldoaktree

Im sitting here under the old oak tree,
waiting for you to come rescue me,
the leaves turn green,
then turn brown,
then all fall,
and flutter down to the ground,
Im still here sitting under the old aok tree,
hoping you will come rescue me,
I see many birds fly around,
and many squirrels on the ground,
then they all go away and fall asleep,
im still here waiting under the old oak tree,
I know Ill be here for all eternity,
waiting for you under the old oak tree.

Comments

[banana_berryxxlolipopxx]

plz join my guild "creative starving artists" i need more ppl in order to continue with the contests. rlly cool prizes!

[critic-the-homeless]

thats a pretty kool peom but u might want to fix the mistakes. o and when u say then all fall down- its sopposed to be THEY all fall down