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In the meadow
flowers bloom,
in the meadow
cows graze,
but you dont know
what's under-ground.
In the meadow
picnic blanket,
in the meadow
ants stealing,
but you dont know
whats under-ground.
In the meadow
people screaming,
in the meadow
worms squurming,
now we know
whats under ground!
by tifflette heart biggrin heart
- Title: In the meadow
- Artist: tifflette
- Description: about the meadow.
- Date: 04/07/2009
- Tags: meadow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- desypoo11 - 03/14/2011
- good poems im a make a song
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- skiggle24 - 11/16/2010
- cute : little cheesy but qute it' sgood for childreans bok :
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- meet ur angel - 09/06/2010
- You named the poem "In the meadow" but the whole point of the poem was, what was under it, so a more appropriate tittle would be nice, but your style of writing is sweet, and that gives you points, so i say 3/5 for creativity, better luck next time
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- cursetechnology - 08/05/2010
- you did a great job with the form. kudos. biggrin
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- Saxy Sullivan - 06/19/2010
- one of the best I've read so far. Wonderful flow with the pattern. It's hard to fit a form sometimes.
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- Imperious Risk - 05/05/2010
- Funny, it made me laugh, but no imagery, 2/5
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- greybeauty12 - 04/24/2010
- this is very unique i like your style in writing.
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