- Babe, everytime i think your name i just want to see you breath out so i can breath you in, everytime, i hear your name i think of the future and everything good,everytime i dream of you i see the most pure spirited angel,every time i hear your voice i hear the most beautiful melody that eccoes throughout the deepest caverns,the most vast forests,and the ever expanding meadows,babe you are perfection and ill always love you and i just want to be with you forever i love you so much,and blessed be my love.
- by Archangel Aalador |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/13/2009 |
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- Title: My Love
- Artist: Archangel Aalador
- Description: I know its kinda short but plse be nice with the comments but be true, enjoy. :)
- Date: 04/13/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XDIm _A_DorkXD - 07/13/2009
- I think the word babe should be replace with something more inhering like my love the word babe sounds kinda weird
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- 9tabbycat - 05/10/2009
- i love this poem, but not as much as i love you, babe! i told u it would be a total masterpeice if you started turning your quotes to poetry!
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- ilyjasper-alice - 04/17/2009
- aw this is so sweet, i love it
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- Archangel Aalador - 04/14/2009
- yes, everything has room for improvement my friend.
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- Ravinesque - 04/14/2009
- Add in some classical english and we have ourselves a young Shakespeare. Still, it'd improve a lot if it was in stanzas, rather than prose.
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