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Hanging friendship,
what do I do?
I know I still have hope in you
On the cliff we stand,
not holding hands
But our backs are turned
livin' on separate lands
You fall off the cliff
I dash to save you
because as I said before
I still have hope for you
I grab your hand
you grab mine
if one of us let go
I won't be fine
because you leave me alone
alone in this world
to face the hurt
feeling alert
your care for me grows weak
and you let go
you fall in the dark abyss
and into the snow
I pull myself up and then look down
sending you tears while wearing a frown
I turn around and then I see
Things that will cause me to flee
like the corrupt society,
and everyday problems and challenges that await me
they stare me square in the eye,
trying to make me cry
but I still stand,
waiting for you
to climb back up
and do what's true
I know you will,
I truly do
because as I said before
I still have hope for you
I can't face this world without you
not now, not ever
Because I'm not pulling down the power lever
I'm not shutting down
I'll still wait for you
because I won't care for whatever else you do
just come back to me
and stop this insanity
and so I wait
eager for your decision
Hoping you don't have some bad vision
and you are at the bottom of the abyss
your clothes stained with my tears
red with blood of the an emotional wound
and I hope you don't fall for your peers
But just know I'm standing
here for you
Hanging friendship, what will you do?
- Title: Hanging Friendship
- Artist: jaeznboi
- Description: This is a poem I made for those who are being betrayed, or losing a friend. Feel free to use it, those who have the same problems. If you do have these problems, then I'm sorry for you, I know how you feel. if you need any explanations from my writing or this specifically this poem- concepts, methods, inspiration, suggestions, etc. Please send me a PM, I am glad to recieve your questions.
- Date: 04/14/2009
- Tags: hanging friendship love angry friend
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XxNot Your_Average GirlxX - 04/23/2009
- Thank you so much for Becoming a fan. This Poem Is my favorite by far. I know exactly how this feels
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- jaeznboi - 04/16/2009
- COMMENT SUM MOAR YOU PPLZ I WANT MY POEM TO BE PRAISED AND BOOED DEPENDING ON WHICH YOU FEEL
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- Ms Make Me Smile - 04/15/2009
- its great and its given me inspiration for a poem as well thanks 5
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- ii ShortCake - 04/15/2009
- i love it ;D
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- jaeznboi - 04/15/2009
- Comment pleaseeee!
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