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The moon
goddess of the night
shimmering as i take in
its soothing light,
Preparing for the darkest of dawns
like a warrior, swift as wind
to fight the devils children
that spawn.
Scarlet red
stains, surrounding my body
caressing my palms,
what have I done?
"I took a life..."
the thought swirled in my head
was it for the goodness of grace
or was it rage.
The beast i fought,
a bitter soul
pale as an imp
I struck his heart
and killed him... dead
My heart
felt as heavy as armor,
and that sweet
sensation and pleasure
that i felt
my first kill.
Was i to be damned to the bottomless pit of hell?
no.
I'm not human
I don't have a soul
or do i?
I did what was right for my people!
my kind,
something so beautiful
it was in disguise.
I could feel it,
that detestable feeling,
dawn was near.
Blazing, the sun was to rise
and the creatures of the night,
were to set.
Deep
into the depths of this
wretched planet
why?
Only god knows.
but i was a black sheep
i wasn't going to hide
the time is near
death is near.
I heard steps
to far in the misty haze for my eyes alone to sight
my mind,
dizzying from that horrible light
the rising sun.
My flesh burning
intense relief filled my heart
it was almost over,
The steps got loader.
but before i could attempt to run
the deed was done
I was pinned to the ground
by the hands no one could
feel
see
touch
not even smell
it was fate
my time to go
the warrior of the unknown
I was gone for eternity
heading for the land
of the dead...
- by big_daddy_cheesstake |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/15/2009 |
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- Title: The Dark Warrior
- Artist: big_daddy_cheesstake
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Description:
This is a type of poem which is called an Epic, which is mainly a story poem. What it is mainly about is a nightly creature kinda like a vampire who kills for the first time. What happens next? Read to find out!
This is my first time writing an epic or poem/story at all so enjoy and PLEASE tell me what you think!
Comments and critique is loved! - Date: 04/15/2009
- Tags: dark warrior vampires deamons
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ULTIMATE_KODIAK - 08/16/2010
- good poem, but shame on you for calling a planet wretched
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- Edward-Bella-NessieCullen - 04/22/2009
- ok wow... you are completely and utterly awsome at writing "epic" ( i like that word) poems and i am awsome at writing nice love ones. you should check mine out sometime. 5 STARS. and no affence cause i am a girl myself but that does not seem like it would be coming from a girl lol.
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 04/15/2009
- that was very good, it was so descriptive, i could see the whole thing. excellent excellent and excellent
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