Lovina's Poem...

• Artist: Zacharaia
• Description: Title: Lovina's Poem: An Unkempt Promise, A Heart that's Broken
  Genre: Freestyle
  A sad/depressing poem. Yes, I know soaken is not a word, but it is only way to make it rhyme with broken.
• Date: 04/15/2009
• Tags: lovinas poem

My halo is missing a piece
And my wings have turned gray.

It seems this pain will never cease
And the voices I hear continue to say:

"Your fragile heart was shattered
And your emotions are oh so tattered.

You try so hard to keep on going,
But you feel your life is flowing

Right out of you with your soul,
And now you feel yourself dying."

I have fallen from heaven
And my heart is hatred soaken.

I was promised love
And it was broken.

Comments

[Ishinoi]

Lol, you at least tried to rhyme with a freestyle. Most people are like "I don't need to when it is freestyle. (insert cool face)" -.-; But this was touching...

[X_Dat_ConfuZed_Dude_x]

Omg that was beautiful. very touching.