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Love is a feeling u get
when u find someone
and you have butterflies in your stomach
whenever they pass by
Love is caring about someone
to the point of death
where they are your life
and they take away your breath
love is being loyal
always there to have your back
when they say "I Love You"
and mean it with no strings attached
Love is everlasting...
its impossible to love someone once
and think it will go away
even though things may hurt you
the love never fades
Love is unexplainable
the way its so diverse
its like taking 1+1 making 1
into a whole other person
Life in your hands
Outlasts everything
Very emotional
Expanding everyday
- by Shadowninja114 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/18/2009 |
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- Title: What love is
- Artist: Shadowninja114
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Description:
just thoughts tell me wat u think
- Date: 04/18/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Mageda - 06/21/2009
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Stolen from Def Jam Poetry.
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- Shadowninja114 - 04/25/2009
- well actually the very last stanza is LOVE acrostic going down on the left side but the one before that i guess i just put it there
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- Sinister Jenney - 04/24/2009
- Omg i think im gunnna cry! this is very good!
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- Autimn - 04/19/2009
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I like it. The last couple stanzas sounded more like a haiku, though. It didn't rhyme, make any sense...But it doesn't really have to.
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- La venganza de Luna - 04/18/2009
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i liked it except for that last 2 stanzas....
you could probably keep going with each line of the last stanza as a new one....
u know such as: Love is life in your hands.....
Love outlasts everything...etc
it just didn't seem to fit.
and i don't think i understand the second to last stanza so don't worry too much about that one.
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