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in the middle of rain
im standing in the center
im looking to orther people
"why are they so happy ??"
"why im the only one who's feels alone ??"
im look to their eyes
i found something that looks realy bright
i dont know what is it ??
i just feels want to have it
but when i try to get it
is dissapear
nothing left beside a lonely feeling
nothing left ...
just like a leaves that fall from the tree
and everyday is getting thin
until nothing left ...
- by Hot lucy94 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/19/2009 |
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- Title: :heart: alone :heart:
- Artist: Hot lucy94
- Description: i just tell what im feelin'
- Date: 04/19/2009
- Tags: heart alone heart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- sm00shed ba_Nana_s - 04/19/2009
- Hey, did you plagarize this like your artwork in your gallery? I'm going to assume you did
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- xretarded_muffinsx - 04/19/2009
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some how i didnt find this as poetry.
but its good! but i didnt find it interesting...
maybe some other stuff to support it
and some alliteration of how yu feel would
help.. im just saying.. dont have to take
my adivce =] - Report As Spam
- TOXiCKiiSS x - 04/19/2009
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5/5 your really good your expressing your emotions which a lot of people look for in poetry. Awesome job!
-Ashley <3 - Report As Spam
- Animeplay99 - 04/19/2009
- Great story biggrin
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