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I let inspiration flow into me,
as I listened to this melody.
Molding a piece of white clay,
on the 18th day of May.
I molded her face, her eyes, her smile,
as I drank from a little vial.
I threw the sculpture away,
for there was nothing more to say.
It's dead! It's dead! It's dead!
There is no sign of life.
I covered my face with dirty hands,
as I thought of worlds filled with vagabonds.
They say I am the "Perfectionist",
whose love is made by one list.
Until I saw her smile at me,
oh what sweet melancholy.
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- Title: My Abstract Eve
- Artist: challen08
- Description: this was something i made early this year, about the time of valentines day. hope you all like it!
- Date: 05/05/2009
- Tags: poetry
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Atheshya - 06/29/2009
- Yay for original subject matter!
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- challen08 - 05/12/2009
- glad you liked it, i worked really hard on this one
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- Captain Is Down To Mars - 05/12/2009
- I like it. I give it a 5. biggrin
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