Not What She Seems

• Artist: sapphirestar_twi88
• Description: A short poem, vague
• Date: 05/07/2009
• Tags: seems

Is she damsel in distress?
The one waking the knight
In shining armor to rescue her.
No.

Is she the naïve maiden?
The one waiting for prince charming
To whisk her off her to a castle.
No.

She is not what she seems
For in this world,
She is her self then the two.

Comments

[child_of_the_flame]

Good. But I think the vagueness was kind of a letdown. You could pull some really neat and striking imagery into this.

[hayatewarrior2]

i like your poem message me and maybe we could be friends 5/5