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Close my eyes.
Hear the rain hit the ground.
Feel the drops on my face.
Smell the wet wood.
Stop.
Wind rustling against the trees.
Leaves blowing to my feet.
Water rushing through my shoes
Stop.
Water trickling down the sewers.
Car whooshes past me.
Everything like a dance.
Stop.
The crackling thunder breaks through it all.
Dripping rain from the roof, wood.
Silent screams from the drying worms.
Stop.
Sunlight bursts through the clouds like an explosion.
Mirrors of water seep through the mud.
Birds chirping.
Stop.
Broken silence from the yells and cries of happy children.
Open my eyes.
Stop.
Join in the fun.
- by iiSkull Candy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/09/2009 |
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- Title: Rain on my Senses.
- Artist: iiSkull Candy
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Description:
I wrote this poem because it rained, i stood outside, and i was thinking a lot.
Although... Please dont criticize.... its my first poem...
I need a better name for this. Help me! x_x - Date: 05/09/2009
- Tags: rain feelings senses
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iiSkull Candy - 06/27/2009
- The stop is there cause it wants to. )<
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- dragongirl209 - 05/20/2009
- Love the poem. What's with the STOP.
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- winky_rox - 05/12/2009
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- I Lilium I - 05/11/2009
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Great poem Cross! <3
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- iiSkull Candy - 05/11/2009
- lol. Guess what? This is also my homework. xD
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- SaLuTe To ThIs NoOb - 05/10/2009
- :] freaking awesomes
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- Mystic Nightclaw - 05/10/2009
- I like it, it's really nice.
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