MY SOULMATE

• Artist: hinata_uchiha345
• Description:
• Date: 05/16/2009
• Tags: soulmate

i think i found the guy
the guy i was shy to find
i looked him in the eyes
and could find his inner soul
his soul stared me right in the eyes
and i could find his inner peace
the inner peace where you can love,respect,adore,and be the real you
i saw the real him in his soul
he saw my soul he saw the real me
then he said he loved me my heart started to pound
i felt like his soul was crying out to me
he was showing me the real him
kind,caring,and loving
i could tell he really loves me
and my soul was screaming out for him
hopefully he could hear my soul
screaming i love you
and if he was my soulmate he would know i would hug him,hold him, and be with him forever
what is a soulmate?
there is no such thing as one
there are lovers and marriage
but the love i want is something
never made...............................................................a soulmate
will there ever be one for me?
i will never know
when the right guy comes i will love
him and adore him with all my heart
but all the questions pop up as well
does he love me back?
will he ever love me the way i love him?
is there love?
well i will never know until
the right guy comes along
he could be in front of meor
half way accross the world
one day i will find my soul mate
i believe i will
and when that day comes he will
be known as my soulmate

Comments

[xselfish_68x]

nice.it has a nice flow and it shows you have artistic poetry potential.stanzas are good (like everyone has already said)and can make your poem easier to read and understand. smile

[hinata_uchiha345]

aw thnx lol i do need to use stanza's in it

[emeraldpuppy9]

great job!
i love it, its very expressive and flows well
i love how it reads (: but possibly splitting it into some stanzas? [not necessary, depends on the poem, and to me, it seems lik this one should XDD]
anyway, fav'd and 5/5 ^^
come rate bck?