Whats wrong with me?

• Artist: iiFreshBby x3
• Description: something is just bothering me
• Date: 06/01/2009
• Tags: whats wrong with

is something W R O N G with M E?

People think I've got it all together
With the show of my sweet smile,
But do they know if I've been happy ever?
Pull up a chair 'cause this may take a while.
Okay, so here's the thing...

I've got my bad days.
And some are even worse.
I can be a blessing.
And you know, I can be a curse.
I tremble at rejection,
I'm scared to be alone.
Sometimes I may be selfish,
But I always make it home.
This is the real me,
With flaws and fears of intimacy.
So now you see that I am far from perfect.
I will fall and I will make mistakes.
I know that I'm demanding,
And sometimes insecure.
I think I've got the answers,
But then I'm not so sure.
I sometimes need attention
A little more than I should
But there is a part of me
That gives the whole world if I could.

Comments

[thefartingspider]

this is a fantastic poem. 5/5

[XxMonsterous MeganxX]

wow i love this poem,
and in all honesty,
even if all these things are true,
i have no doubt in my mind that there are many people out there who love you,
despite your imperfections.
and i can definitely relate,
trust me i have lots of issues.
this is a great poem, and like gabriella (person under me)
i'd be proud if i wrote this.

[gabriellax1933]

wow i really like this poem, if u ask me nothing is wrong with you. but like everyone we all say to ourselves is something wrong with me. but i get ur point and love it for it relates to me..

such a great poem i would be sooo proud of it if i wrote it myself. really great.....