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Blue as the sky,
That passes me by.
Mellow as the song,
That makes me cry.
Dark as the night,
That engulfs the day.
How will I do,
If you're away?
Like cold December breeze,
That braces me tight.
Still gentler than blazing flame,
That just came to light.
Such loneliness I'm feeling,
Chills me to death.
It's as if you're paralyzed but not.
You just can't feel your breathe.
Now those eyes of green,
Sends sparks to my spine.
And look at those hands,
They're real, damn fine.
And the silence we make,
Knocks me off my feet.
While waiting to say,
"My LOVE can't wait.
Please just stay"
- by Kiimi Tomoyou |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/05/2009 |
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- Title: Love Can't Wait, Can It?
- Artist: Kiimi Tomoyou
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Description:
Well, I just made this poem out of the blue while thinking of my long-time crush...
Hope you'll like it.. - Date: 06/05/2009
- Tags: love cant wait
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Comments (2 Comments)
- 4ever_lost in_ ur eyes - 06/09/2009
- i like it but i agree the writing color and the emotes are making it a bit weird
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- bindyblueeyes - 06/07/2009
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my only problem is that the writing is pink and you use the emotes
but other than that this is pretty good - Report As Spam