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*I am One Soul
*I wonder whats really behind these tears
*I hear the goodbyes of so many people in my life
*I see the old scars on my wrists
*I want his memories out of my head
*I am one Soul
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*I imagine I am finally free of all this
*I feel the pain inside my heart
*I touch the empty picture frames
*I worry I hurt not just myself but others with my lies
*I cry as though its normal for me
*I am one Soul
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*I understand my mom tries her hardest to help
*I say feelings are just getting in the way
*I dream that it will just all go away
*I try not to show my Emotions,hiding behind a fake smile
*I hope to understand it all
*I am one soul
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- Title: One soul
- Artist: A Krysis
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Description:
We were writing poems in school the other day and everyone was making there's full of fake crap.I decided I wanted to make one true to what I am feeling.
This is also the first time I entered anything so comments are great:) - Date: 06/05/2009
- Tags: soul
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Comments (4 Comments)
- A Krysis - 08/15/2009
- Thank for for the lovely comments
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- Open_Rose - 06/07/2009
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It's really good. So much emotion. I just love it. Keep writing!!
5/5
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- mesme_15 - 06/06/2009
- i liked it 5/5
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- Kio Konarage - 06/05/2009
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Its good, you just need to put a little rhyme in it to make it more snappy..... You can look at my poems for an example if you want to...... 5/5.....
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Kio Konarage - Report As Spam