One soul

• Artist: A Krysis
• Description: We were writing poems in school the other day and everyone was making there's full of fake crap.I decided I wanted to make one true to what I am feeling.
  
  This is also the first time I entered anything so comments are great:)
• Date: 06/05/2009
• Tags: soul

*I am One Soul
*I wonder whats really behind these tears
*I hear the goodbyes of so many people in my life
*I see the old scars on my wrists
*I want his memories out of my head
*I am one Soul
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*I imagine I am finally free of all this
*I feel the pain inside my heart
*I touch the empty picture frames
*I worry I hurt not just myself but others with my lies
*I cry as though its normal for me
*I am one Soul
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*I understand my mom tries her hardest to help
*I say feelings are just getting in the way
*I dream that it will just all go away
*I try not to show my Emotions,hiding behind a fake smile
*I hope to understand it all
*I am one soul

Comments

[A Krysis]

Thank for for the lovely comments

[Open_Rose]

It's really good. So much emotion. I just love it. Keep writing!!
5/5
- Rose

[mesme_15]

i liked it 5/5

[Kio Konarage]

Its good, you just need to put a little rhyme in it to make it more snappy..... You can look at my poems for an example if you want to...... 5/5.....

Signed,
Kio Konarage