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Life
A game we’re all playing
We need to know the tricks of staying alive
And not going down fast.
The pain
We bring to the table
During a new round
The adrenalin pumping.
Should I make a left here
Or should I go right?!
To see people hurt
Is that how we’re supposed to win?
Cause I’ve lost this game already
I’d rather save then kill
Help someone up
Instead of pushing them in the dirt.
But if this is how to win
Then I’m not planning on
Winning anytime soon.
I’d rather stay the loser.
- by cute Jamie kitty |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/14/2009 |
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- Title: the game
- Artist: cute Jamie kitty
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- Date: 06/14/2009
- Tags: game
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Punk Fox TH - 06/21/2009
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In response to treekeeper, we are all very glad you are not an editor to any literary magazine.
To cute Jamie kitty: The concept is strong, but you really need to learn meter. Poetry without meter is merely prose. Improve that, and you'll be much better off. - Report As Spam
- Bloodsoakedbutterfly - 06/14/2009
- i love this piece the use of metafores-life being a game- try submitting this to a magazine! if i were in charge this would be in
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