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i have a thorn in my heart.
i didn't have in the start.
and it hurts, and it bleeds.
and im down on my knees.
oh please.
remove it......
- by hopeless-lover9595 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/15/2009 |
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- Title: thorn
- Artist: hopeless-lover9595
- Description: one of my poems
- Date: 06/15/2009
- Tags: thorn
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Comments (3 Comments)
- stone-cold-017 - 06/20/2009
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nice job, it shows "heartbreak" w/o soo many words...i like it.
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- PizzaToGo - 06/16/2009
- hmm... well it's pretty good... not the best thing I have seen but it's pretty good! 5/5
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- kamahaazi - 06/15/2009
- personally, I would have used a different word instead of remove, but good
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