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I told him the truth.....
He didn't believe me.....
I told him I cared.....
He just stared.....
I told him I was interested.....
He asked, "Why".....
I told him my feelings.....
He said, "Yea"......
i told him I was in love......
He turned away.......
So i asked him, "would you notice if i died"......
He turned back around and looked me in the eye and said, "of course i would notice if you'd gone and died I would have no one to love now i must say goodbye".......
So I turned away and began to cry hiding the shame of asking "Why"......
- by volleyballpixie7 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/20/2009 |
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SilverBowAndArrow - 05/08/2010
- Thats amazing! It kind of reminds me of my style xD
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- vv7722 - 06/21/2009
- Sad. It doesn't fit in some places, but it's pretty good. 4/5
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- Hysteria1667 - 06/20/2009
- really good, i like it 5/5
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- volleyballpixie7 - 06/20/2009
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how long do u want it i just typed it it was what i was thinking about got any ideas
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- Hinata Matsuri - 06/20/2009
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could be a bit longer...
4/5 - Report As Spam
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