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I look apon a star.
I see you standing there.
When i walk around,i see your face everywhere.
It's just a little dream,right now as it seems.
When i close my eyes,I'm in paradise.
I open them again and all i see are lies.
I imagine your beautiful brown eyes.
They got me hypnotized.
Am i really in love?
O r did cupid give me a hard shove?
I never knew i'd find someone like you...
I'm so sick im turning blue.(itz a good thing lol)
I look apon a star.
And i see you standing there... 4laugh
How can i make it better??????????????
- by montanas sexy lil angel23 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/26/2009 |
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- Title: Look apon a star...COMMENT PLZ
- Artist: montanas sexy lil angel23
- Description: IDK i was just thinking about my bf and this came to me...(:
- Date: 06/26/2009
- Tags: look apon star
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Comments (3 Comments)
- montanas sexy lil angel23 - 07/14/2010
- BTW.My friend Cassidee helped me with it.
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- montanas sexy lil angel23 - 07/01/2009
- thank you,that iz a good point
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- junkiehunkie - 06/30/2009
- That is a really good poem. There isn't much to fix, but if there was I would say to just find better more poetic rhyming words
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