Love

• Artist: sweetgirl101209
• Description: any comments or suggestions would be great :)
• Date: 06/28/2009
• Tags: love pain strong

Love is hurt
Love is pain
Love is guilt
Love is shame

Love is deaf
Love is blind
Love is harsh
Love is kind

Love should be treasured
Held close to your heart
Love should be together
Never torn apart

Love always comforts you
From all your darkest fears
Even though it sometimes seems
It causes streaming tears

But love is strong
Love is true
And love will always
See you through

Comments

[2pound]

i suggest you learn the meaning of the word "metaphor" before you write about love again; also, the word "cliche" and i suggest you do it ASAP, otherwise, your poem is deaf, blind, and boring. 1/10

[ABluejay]

good I guess. But a poem isn't just rhymes.