Cracking into pieces

• Artist: -FlyingKookie-
• Description: I was bored and thought of this poem-ish thing.
  Its not true but i like it. one of my best pieces of writing.
• Date: 06/28/2009
• Tags: cracking into pieces

Ibegan to crack into pieces.
I had to try everything possible to repair myself.
Tapeing the cracks was a fail and nothing else seemed to be a success.
I had to face the fact that my life was ending.
Slowly and painfully, it was ending.

I kept staring at nothing, waiting for my life to just fall into a pile of glass but nothing ever seemed to happen.
Just more and more cracks came upon me and into view.
Slowly and willingly my eyes fell shut and never opened again.

All sights, sounds, smells were fading.
Nothing left of me.
The blackness on my eyelids kept getting darker and darker.
Sound, sights everything became mute.
Nothing. Nothing...Nothing.

Comments

[-FlyingKookie-]

Thanks Guys! I appreciate it!! c:

[Juliet_Cries]

I agree with Cupcakes. You are a very amazing writer. It's not that often I find a person who can actually paint a picture in my mind with something they wrote. Very amazing.

[CrowleysGirl]

wow sam im impressed! thts much bttr than the crap i write! 5/5

[IWillBeSombodySomeday]

wow thats good your better than me at it and i gave it a 5/5. your welcome =D

[maiden of the stars]

Cute..sort-of xD Better then most of the poems here

[Devilish_x]

You are better than me at poem writing stuff D;
awesome...5/5 ;D

[Cupcakes McFairypants]

This paints a very amazing and tragic picture. You're an amazing writer.