Lost

• Artist: watermelon1995
• Description: a poem i wrote about being isolated in nature
• Date: 06/29/2009
• Tags: lost

I see the dew brushed forest
I smell the wild flowers' fragrance
I hear the oak surrender with a crash
I feel the thorns of the tender rose
I taste summer is ending
I think back to years before

Comments

[WhiteMageBef]

This I think could have been a much tell-tale piece if made bigger. You have a great border for a epic no doubt. wink

[Madidog123]

That's awesome, for some reason it reminds me of anime. That means it's great!

[Taste of a Raindrop]

This is an amazing poem. It is deep, expressive, and says a lot in just a few lines. Good job. 5/5