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The Craving
Walking in the woods,
I heard a strange sound.
One I never heard before.
As I got closer,
I could hear It better.
It’s heart beat.
I looked to the horizon,
And saw It staring at me…
I started running, running,
Running in the other direction.
Towards the cabin, I ran.
I looked around.
I wasn’t moving.
Behind me,
It was closer.
Following me, following me
Staring It’s blank stare.
Reaching out, reaching out.
It grabbed my shoulder,
Spun me around.
I stared at It in the face.
Death.
There was nothing,
Nothing but death,
Seeping into my very soul.
It’s sharp fingernails,
Scraping, scraping my chin.
I felt the blood,
Running down my neck.
Darkness soon joined me.
Darkness, darkness.
A sudden gust of wind,
Light, light,
The light of…
Of what?
I opened my eyes,
Opened my eyes,
And It’s bright red eyes,
Met mine.
Why, why,
Why me?
It’s thoughts entered my mind.
Thoughts of death,
Thoughts of darkness.
The vampire.
I looked at him,
He just stared, stared,
Stared into my eyes.
His bright, red eyes.
Nothingness…
Nothingness all around me,
Silence,
Nothing.
Again, Darkness.
Around me,
A pool of Blood.
My neck, punctured,
Bite marks,
Blood, Blood.
I had become one,
One of them.
The craving, the craving,
The craving started.
Running, running,
Faster than ever.
Following the scent of Blood.
My Blood.
In his mouth,
In his soul.
His thoughts were my thoughts.
Our thoughts.
Follow, follow,
Follow until…
Darkness,
Until darkness.
Numbness,
Through my spine,
Through my veins.
The craving…
The craving.
~*~Snapdragon~*~
- by Snapdragon0720 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/01/2009 |
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- Title: The Craving
- Artist: Snapdragon0720
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Description:
Sitting alone in my room, I came to thinking, "What would a person be thinking if they came in contact with a vampire?" and "What would they be thinking if they BECAME a vampire?" This poem is written in the point of view of THAT person! I'm thinking of possibly making this into a series, but I want to see some feedback before I submit others…
This poem does not rhyme and isn't written in any specific format. But it IS a poem... ENJOY!
~*~Snadragon~*~ - Date: 07/01/2009
- Tags: craving vampires blood goth sacred
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Cat of 9 tails - 08/11/2009
- I've seen people try to make train of thought poems and fail epicly before, but you pulled it off wonderfully. I give you 5 gold stars and an A that you can take home and stick to your fridge door. n_n
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- Ravenxbbfan - 07/05/2009
- you should write a story about this kind of thing!
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- animewolf16 - 07/04/2009
- I love the way it flows, like frantic thoughts. In a defined line yet bouncing from thought to thought. I'd love to see more. smile
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- JInnYenn - 07/04/2009
- Interesting?
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- Lady Alice Road Kamelot - 07/01/2009
- Good idea, and great way of showing it. Astounding!
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