remember me for this

• Artist: Jukeisha-Heika
• Description: this is pretty much a shortened version of a poem i wrote. i want to see if my writing is any good, please rate and comment :D
• Date: 07/05/2009
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so, here i am
and i'm here again
withering away
shrinking into my bed
so you won't forget
the blood that drips from my wrist
and the one last time
we had our final kiss
i'll leave the razorblade
with your name on the tip
please don't hate me for this
i'll make you sorry again
pass me the bottle
please don't forget the gun
because russian roulette
with you is so much fun
and i'll make everyone see
that you pulled the trigger for me

Comments

[Baka Keima]

This poem is depressing. Good job! I really liked it. Your writing is very good, so write more~!

[Zombie Kebab]

I liked it, Don't listen to chance, just because your poetry is sad and depressed like some of mine doesn't MEAN you need help unless you're about to go kill yourself, In that case get help but dont tell an authoritive figure, they force you into a Behavorial center *baker acted* and they make you pretty much stay till they deem you better *about 3-7 days* and its really boring x.o

[chance-the-man-slayer]

good but u need help but no gov he they make you the worst.........