our world today?

• Artist: loveless_neko
• Description: i wrote this poetry as a 2 person saying, i was watching everyone and everything around me at the time. please tell me what yea think <3 if u want to hear more of wht i have pm me =^-^=
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: world today

What is the problem with this world... Why is there so much pain and suffering? Why cant anyone get along? Why cant anyone be happy? Who would want 2 enter a world wit pain and suffering? A demon thats who... An evil creature who likes 2 kill. Who likes 2 make pain. Who like 2 make suffering 4 other creatures. Someone like a God of Death. Whos job is 2 kill and is very good at it. This world is soul-less. I hate this bad world i live in, but yet some of it is good witch is the part of your loved ones and most charished ones.

Comments

[iI Pearla Ii]

You should fix your grammar and spelling before posting anywhere, don't use "text talk" in your poetry (such as 2 and 4).
Just trying to be helpful~