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The loud noices,
i hear every night.
The screaming,
the bangs,
the beggins,
the sounds.
My mommy gets hurt,
and my daddy if proud.
He hits her when he drinks,
When he comes home late at night.
Mommy Can only,
put up such a fight.
So one night when he wasnt home,
she decided to do something verry strong.
She began to pack,
all of her things,
as i sat there and watched.
She started to sing.
She told me it would be alright,
and told me to get my stuff.
But mommy wasnt fast enough.
Because daddy got home,
and he began to scream.
Yelling at my mommmy,
who stop her joyfull singing.
As i sat scared in my room.
I was puzzled,
because there was a great boom.
I did not hear my mommy.
My daddy did not think.
But i heard his foot steps comming up the stairs.
I try to hide, but i have nothing to spare.
If mommy was gone,
there was nothing to do,
Soon i was reunited with my mommy,
Some where save, we now call home.
- by MaybeXDeadXCats |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: Mommy, dont leave me.
- Artist: MaybeXDeadXCats
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Description:
Daddy is so mean.
Yet another poem, its like my 3 one tonight please comment and rate, and none of my killing poems are real so yeah haha (: - Date: 07/08/2009
- Tags: mommy dont leave
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Comments (5 Comments)
- cantstopcrazy - 04/27/2010
- that was really good, the fact that you could stretch to another age level is really cool 5/5
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- Confizzled_Claustrophobic - 07/11/2009
- I'd like it better if you wrote it at your age level. But it's deep. 3/5
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- Mystic_Blue510 - 07/10/2009
- wow. good job. it was powerful at the same time it spoke bout others ahve the same problem
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- xxInoxxShikamaru - 07/09/2009
- Thats relli awesome.. lol
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- Blood Of a Demonic Angel - 07/08/2009
- wow. thats deep. 100000/5
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