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Dewdrops kiss the petals with morning light
Shortly after they disappear, transformed to mist
Light shines through with a golden cast
Shimmering curtains of unattainable beauty
Every secret rests behind it where it shall not be seen
The secrets of a young girls heart, a beautiful lie
These secrets we hold deep in our hearts
As real as the dewdrops and unreachable as the golden mists
Of all ages the rose is beautifully delicate yet permeates
Its perfume attracts, thorns protect
The gardeners appreciate the rose, respects its ethreal inner light
They wish to bind it, cut it for their own purpous
These roses wilt, thirst, cut off from their roots, the dew
They eventually die, but in this they triumph
For the dewdrops that kissed the petals so lovingly
And the golden curtain that shielded its secrets
They never stopped loving the roses
And the deep secrets locked away in the roses' hearts
Was never revealed to the greedy gardeners
Another rose blooms and another rose wilts
Forever and ever the delicate balance continues
A thousand stories of pain and love
The secrets never to be revealed to the gardeners
When it was so simple and easy to see
The secret is a love between a You and a Me
- by Zombie Kebab |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/09/2009 |
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- Title: Secret of a Rose
- Artist: Zombie Kebab
- Description: One of my favorite poems I have written, please comment I love your feedback<3
- Date: 07/09/2009
- Tags: roses
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Comments (3 Comments)
- AiaSand - 07/11/2009
- That... was so sweet I all most cried. You should keep making more and save them for a rainy day.
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- Hallow16 - 07/09/2009
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Beautiful! Five stars! There are a couple errors, but they are easily fixed. First, perhaps a different name. I've read several poems with the title 'Roses,' ect. I suggest something like "The Rose's Secret." Also, in the line "Until another rose blooms and another rose wilts," you should remove 'until.' Next, add punctuation. Commas, periods, they all make the poem flow better. And the say when to breath, and people like breathing ^.^ other than that, beautiful!
Thank you,
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- Zolairty - 07/09/2009
- I love it! That is so sweet. It's expertly written. 5/5!
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