Invisible Until You Laugh

• Artist: KurimusonChishio
• Description: I wrote this a long time ago. It was written to represent how I felt being alone and without any friends. After all back in middle school I was the freak that no one liked. It made it to the semi-finals of a nation wide contest. So I hope you like it.
• Date: 07/09/2009
• Tags: invisible until laugh alone depressed

Who am I, but a cloud of dust?

Not seen nor hear by anyone, not even a passing glance.

No one cares or listens, for the dust will just go.

But, if you want to torment or pick on someone, then I'm as clear as a sign.

A sign on a building, saying, "pick on me, pick on me, torment me, I'm the only one."

Comments

[Deathcake J]

It's unapologetic and concise. Needs an edit for "hear" to "heard" though? Excellent piece, it can be difficult to express anger and depression without getting obnoxiously angsty. Well done!