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im the rose ,
your the daisy,
wearing those bright yellow petals,
i dont know what my petals shows,
your the sun and i'm the moon,
you shine brightly over the mountains,
and i come up after you very soon,
your in love and im heart broken,
you have someone who cares ,
i have completly noone,
your the school queen girl that has everything she desires,
and i am the school freack that nobody knows.
how i wish i could be you,
having friends and something new,
your so nice and lovely,
i wish i could be like you,
so gracful and davine,
with blue eyes as deep as the sparkling ocean ,
with sunshine yellow hair that shines every were ,
the most wonderful parents and sibling brothers,
your brother your sister your father and your mother,
while i have boring brown eyes and dull blue hair,
no siblings,no parents no famlily at all
i am not as perfect as you,
i am not as lovely,
but i am as happy.
- by Cherryblossomcrystal |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/11/2009 |
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- Title: im the rose and your the daisy
- Artist: Cherryblossomcrystal
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Description:
it is about a girl who has the perfect life and a girl opaset as her wanting to be the her in every wway but just couldent.
- Date: 07/11/2009
- Tags: rose your daisy happy
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Comments (3 Comments)
- MistressOfBatsAndShadows - 08/18/2009
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its got alot of thought itno it..but you should try using words such as 'like' or 'as' for a bigger effect so people can imagine and feel your words...
eg - your eyes are like a calm blue river as they change into something thinner...
but still really good ideas :0
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- shutupandeatthisdoughnut - 07/15/2009
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well i thought this poem is gud
but dont be so hard on ur self. - Report As Spam
- Romantic Infection - 07/15/2009
- the idea is well thought out, but the rhyme scheme i think is a bit stretched a times.
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