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Curled up tight, sleeping
awakening,open, bloom,
the flower lives on.
- by DeliciousRus |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/14/2009 |
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- Title: Seasons for flowers
- Artist: DeliciousRus
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Description:
It's a Haiku.
Haiku- A poem constisting of three lines and 17 syllables-- the first line contains five syllables, the second has seven, and the last has five. - Date: 07/14/2009
- Tags: flowers
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Comments (2 Comments)
- DeliciousRus - 07/18/2009
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biggrin
fixed.
thanks for pointing that out.
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- Reves de Toi - 07/17/2009
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Your second line has 9 syllables, not seven. >.<
lol, still good, though
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