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Mr. Bones, cracked and frowzy,
a loose grin hangs on your lips.
Holes gape and gawk at whomever stands before you-
you swallow all and yet see none.
your milky fingers squirm and twinge, like quivering spiders
wishing to weave one last time.
Wretched, they call you:
the haplessly deceased.
"Such a pity," they wail
"No breath shall escape his lungs!"
Here you sit, gathering dust and
crumbling away, into nihility...
Alas, Mr. Bones, I envy you for all these things.
- Title: Lament Of The Fortunate
- Artist: ViRabbit
- Description: Hi..This is my first time putting something in the arenas ^^' So I've been toying with poetry a bit for the last couple months..And I came up with this the other day. So please comment and tell me what you think :]
- Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: lament fortunate death bones skeleton
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ~Shadey Sam~ - 07/28/2009
- I really like it. I love the despcriptions it's like i can see him. 5/5 keep it up.
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- Intrepid Indigo - 07/26/2009
- I've been browsing through the arenas for awhile and I can honestly say that so far this is the best thing I have read. It is a really vivid image. Welcome to the arenas.
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- Mskitty511 - 07/26/2009
- OMJashin I love it! 5/5 n_n
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