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The water around me is rising so fast
On a mission to destroy
Who I am
What I stand for
And I can’t swim
I thrash and kick trying to stay afloat
I lose too quickly
Giving up a race
I was meant to lose
No one tries to stop me
For fear they too will lose
To the starry sky of forever
- by Somethin _Surreal |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/23/2009 |
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- Title: Lose
- Artist: Somethin _Surreal
- Description: I don't really like the title, but I had to pick something, oh well. So here is another one of my poems. Yay **roles my eyes**. I just like sharing myself with the world. If you could PLEASE comment I love to here anything that you have to say.
- Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: lose
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Little-Lenah - 07/28/2009
- Beautiful and captivating. Well done. 5/5
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- RockNRollChick13 - 07/26/2009
- I actually like it to be honest. Life is a race you just can't win. Keep writing I really like all your stuff. And thanks for the comment and rating. =D
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