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It cools you down on a warm spring day,
Wind
something far better than AC,
Wind
it's something wiser than us
Wind
It helps us love
(It's horrible, I know! But be kind and give me advice, maybe(?)It's cheesey too...)
- Title: Wind
- Artist: AriniChan
- Description: well, it's a poem, please leave nice comments!
- Date: 07/29/2009
- Tags: wind
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ElementalDragonBlue - 08/04/2009
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Keep writing your poem is good. I reworked your poem I hope you do not mind. This is how I reworked it as seen below
WIND
It's something wiser than us
it cools you down on a warm spring day
it is something far better than AC
it helps us love
it is the wind - Report As Spam
- gerbils4 - 08/04/2009
- It sux! lol jk its good. You shouldn't doubt yourself so much.
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