A Perfect Day

• Artist: xAssassin of Darknessx
• Description: I had a dream that my gf and I were on vacation. we went to the carribean. everything was perfect. the poem will tell you everything.
• Date: 07/29/2009
• Tags: perfect

I can see it now

Just you and me

Laying on a warm tropical beach

The sun shining

The water so clean

So blue

The wind giving a slight breeze

You in my arms

Watching the sunset

The sky

So colorful

Red, yellow, and orange

Like looking at a painting

But only its real

Its almost a dream

But its not

Its real

Its real cause I have you.

Nothing could make me happier

Than having you by my side.

Comments

[Zitenshi]

Good poem ^^ that dream may had been really good smile
well, got to say, GOOD JOB. ill rate sth... S.E.C.R.E.T
hahaa, btw, rate back to my poem? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=100097141

[Demi-were]

so um much for darkness huh???
too bad i liked though
it rhymed
so yea
i give u what u deserve...
eh a five
but ony cuz i cant rate 4.5

[Dawn Mercer]

hey man i want to ask you a favor and i wonder?
can you write a poem about me and ash just this once plz