Mind Wounds

• Artist: rafihippiebat
• Description: A poem i wrote about how I felt...and I understand if you dont like it....but i want to see if is any good.
• Date: 08/01/2009
• Tags: mind wounds

I see them move with out a single sound
and the more i am wishing to drown
And These wounds they get stronger
I don't know if I can take it any longer
Is this sharped object my resolution?
or am I just living in confusion

These small cuts keep adding up
but inside I know it has to stop
I have to resist all tension
and forget about this grave sensation
I have to stop living in a lie
as they say "Live and Let Die"

This weakness is all but simplified
is not like I am thinking of suicide
Great darkness has taken over my body
and is not enough to say I am sorry
But sooner or later is all going to end
So ill have to forget and pretend

Comments

[rafihippiebat]

thanks

[Sesskogaru]

hmmmmmmmmmmm...very interesting. I heard a small and quite voice as I read this. Sounds determined. ^^ Didn't quite grasp the overall effect of the poem but the ending was great. wink keep up the great work.