dreams ^_^

• Artist: iliandra1000
• Description: yup this one is another from me ^_^
  lol yeah i know i suck in poems but im trying here ^_^
  lol well you know the drill.....wait you dont?
  awww....fine ill repeat just cause u cools =]
  comment whatever you feel
  and rate you dont have too tho
  
• Date: 08/09/2009
• Tags: dreams

Dreams travel time to time
as your mind begans to unwhine
Pictures appear through your eyes
unsure if their truth or lies
And just when you have it figured out
the sun comes out and about
You open your eyes slow and steadly
damnit.....you have to get ready
you pick out your clothes quick to get dress
make sure you dont forget breakfast!
as you prepare yourself
just dont forget
" its your against the world "





lol yeah i kno it stopped rhyming at the end but well......idk ^_^

Comments

[ElectraShocked]

It doesn't suck...that bad, jk jk. XP I think its great. Just keep practicing and you'll get better, I think I did (I don't mean to sound concieted)
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