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I guess it's really over
After everything I've done...
I guess I was wrong
You were NOT the ONE.
I guess you'll call me crazy
If we ever speak again
But I don't want to leave you...
I'd rather end up dead.
- by Alexanderpia |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/16/2009 |
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- Title: Poem... I Guess.
- Artist: Alexanderpia
- Description: I guess you'll read this poem, so hear me loud and clear. If you rate it wisely, to me you'll be held dear (lol)
- Date: 08/16/2009
- Tags: poemguessalexandria31440
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Alexanderpia - 08/17/2009
- Lol I didn't wanna make it long, that's why it's so short... x3 Thanks though!
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- The Investigative Sponge - 08/16/2009
- I like it. (Bigger font next time, maybe?) But, I like it. My only advice (constructive criticism, 'fore I'm no lyricist) is read it over and over and over again. Make it flow so smooth, that you can't tell where it begins and where it ends. Eh... Who am I to be giving "advice", anyway?
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