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“We wait and watch, hidden in the mist,
Words uttered softly from sullen lips?”
“Without pain, love would not exist,
Pain wrapped around our aching hearts.”
“He‘ll never grasp his sudden luck,
Words uttered softly from sullen lips?”
“She’ll never guess he’s such a schmuck,
Pain wound around our aching hearts.”
“Her figure dances through your mind,
Words uttered softly from sullen lips?”
“She makes me wish my eyes were blind,
Pain coiled around our aching hearts.”
"The cold soulless nights, the ones you hide
Words uttered softly from sullen lips?”
“I feel as though my love has died,
Pain curled around our dying hearts.”
- by Sinful Fool |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/01/2009 |
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- Title: Ballad attempt #2
- Artist: Sinful Fool
- Description: This is the Updated version of Ballad # 1 after talking to my English teacher. XD Enjoy.
- Date: 09/01/2009
- Tags: ballad attempt
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Intrepid Indigo - 09/01/2009
- Really nice, enjoyed reading it. One comment though the word Schmuck seemed . . . kinda out of tone.
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