- I'm not shakespeare but I wish i knew what to say to you tonight , I like the way you do to your eyes when you smile and your face shines up my whole world I could always feel it inside my heart and that's one of many things I like about you.
- by Black Dying Roses |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/01/2009 |
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- Title: What would I say to my girl
- Artist: Black Dying Roses
- Description: hope you like it ..... I made this myself (not lying)
- Date: 09/01/2009
- Tags: saytoagirl youlove shinemyworld
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- LoudmouthedTasi - 11/18/2012
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I'd honestly suggest you refine it a bit more before your performance. Lots of words are said by a lot of people, and you want yours to stand out. Right now, I can tell you have strong feelings, but it doesn't stand out.
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- xI run with scissorsx - 07/25/2010
- Cute!
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- Black Dying Roses - 06/22/2010
- yeah i did smile
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- Inu_Fangirl - 06/21/2010
- That's soo cute. =) Did you say it to someone?
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- Bipolar Mess - 06/10/2010
- thats so sweet
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- sharon miller1 - 04/16/2010
- wow !!! ^_^
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- Black Dying Roses - 03/24/2010
- tnx
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