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The anger inside me
Starts to overflow
The happiness throughout me gets to a very low
I grit my teeth
The hatred inside me is right underneath
My eyes go red
While I wrack my head
I run for the man
As if I wanted him dead
All of a sudden I see a girl
So sad and distressed
I stop in my tracks
And become depressed
I glance behind me
As I see my mistakes
I fall to the ground
"What have I done??!"
I howled
Out of the darkness
The girl scowled
Than I noticed my horrific deeds
It all started
From a terrible seed
And that seed
sprouted my
Rage
- Title: Rage
- Artist: Tweego
- Description: Would love some comments. I want to know how people think of my writing.
- Date: 09/08/2009
- Tags: rage
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Tweego - 09/28/2009
- Woot^^ thnx
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- st0rmwing85 - 09/28/2009
- pretty good striz. i have to say, it was way easier to understand than winstons
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- Tweego - 09/09/2009
- Thanks :3
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- Kaija_14 - 09/08/2009
- wow it's wonderful, the way it flowed worked really well, loved it!!
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- Sapphirianna - 09/08/2009
- Awesome! biggrin great potential for a future author! wink
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