pain

• Artist: Eva-Chan2846
• Description: i write this at school , i have been feeling very depressed since 6th grade, and im getting help in therapy....
• Date: 09/08/2009
• Tags: pain

loneliness
quietness
depression
felling hurt
wanting to die
wanting to scream
wanting to fly up high
hurting others
causing pain
slowly dieing
tears of pain
wishing to better
wishing to be free
wanting to see angels
wanting eternal love
tears of joy and tears of pain
missing the one who should be here
nightmares and horrid thoughts
wanting to be taught
taught to be better
taught to love
wanting not to feel this way
wanting not to cause pain
running away form hatred
running from the pain
pretending to be happy
when im really not
keeping all the secrets
keeping all the thoughts
keeping all this hatred
keeping all this pain
thoughts that feel like acid rain
a broken record of sham
wanting to die
wanting to scream
wanting to be loved
wanting to be held
a broken soul of sham

Comments

[Fallen Angel Revan]

Oh yeah and thanks for being the first to comment on my poem.

[Fallen Angel Revan]

I agree with perd, It just looks like words to me but I see where you connected everything. Your better than me in many ways and I'm not in position to be bashing your poem. Its good, Its just boring to me.

[inktears]

WOW! that's very good. even tho its sad

[perd85]

to be brutally honest i could'nt finish it, it did'nt really grab my attention, i'm sure a lot of people like it but its just not my cup of tea