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The moment whirls around my mind,
Sneaks up and stabs me from behind
The longest lasting vortex spins around
Can't tell which way is up or down.
No dealing with the aches and pains,
There's nothing there for me to gain,
This headache I've got is consistent,
Goes away and comes back, it's persistent.
None of this can i avoid,
It controls me, I'm their droid,
They cast their spell on pitiful me,
Now i endure pure agony.
- by Doomed Phyre Rose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/26/2009 |
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- Title: Agony
- Artist: Doomed Phyre Rose
- Description: dramatic poem about a headache
- Date: 09/26/2009
- Tags: agony
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- F a t a l D e c o d e - 09/28/2009
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Very creative! The last line of the second stanza throws off the rhythm a little, but it's still good. 5/5
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