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UNTOUCHABLY REAL
UC Poika
I stand and shout at the image you leave in my mind,
I hate you for being untouchably real to my soul,
Not real enough to wrap my arms about
But shadow enough my hands pass right through you
And I hunger to see you as one views game from a blind
To touch your heart like a filly’s is by her foal
And to handle you like you were not what I am without
As if we could really love each other and that be true,
But for now my mind screams that it’s unfair to us,
Unfair to me... unfair to you... it’s unfair!
You’re all I want! You’re perfectly fabulous!
O my God why don’t You just this one time care?
But alas, my love, I must love with my heart alone
Never to fully rhyme... but eye-rhyming until I’m done!
- Title: UNTOUCHABLY REAL
- Artist: UC Poika
- Description: wanting is not always having especially where romance is concerned.
- Date: 10/03/2009
- Tags: untouchably real romance
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Comments (2 Comments)
- FuriazFTW - 11/03/2009
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Damn. 0.o
This is another five. Seriously. I don't know if I've ever given a person two fives in the same night.
I can feel your emotion in this one, man. I can picture it in my head - a woman walking through a man's outstretched arms, almost like a spectre of the mind.
Definitely one of your best pieces. - Report As Spam
- froggy0295 - 10/24/2009
- This poem really gets to me.... I feel like it's what my heart is saying... It was really good and well written...
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