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As the rain fell
There was no bird in sight
As I saw the drops on the ground
My eyes felt weird
As the drops fell off my face
No one could tell
As I wonder the streets
I was thinking of you
As the rains fell
My body was turning cold
As I followed the road
There was two paths
As I wonder what road to take
I made a wrong turn
As the rain turned to snow
I was lost
As I lied on the ground
No one came for me
Guess what happened next…
- by LostInThisDance |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/06/2009 |
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- Title: the rain
- Artist: LostInThisDance
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Description:
just a free verse again
it kinda suxs though but ya anyways what u guys think???
rate and comments plz - Date: 10/06/2009
- Tags: rain love misery nature
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Comments (3 Comments)
- xxroselovexx - 10/20/2009
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doesnt suck
i like this poem 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Arc En Licorne - 10/09/2009
- it wuz good in a depressing kinda way i liked it 4/5
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- SinclaireRose - 10/08/2009
- It was depressing.. in some odd way.. sad
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