Sorry

• Artist: danzergirl1
• Description: I wrote this...oh...a few hours ago? It's out of experience. i didn't make it up for nothing.
• Date: 10/09/2009
• Tags: sorry

I don't know why you hate me so,
I’m sorry, but I had to let you go.
You see I can't control this thing called love,
Any more than I can control the stars above.
I'm sorry I don't love you anymore,
And I'm sorry you love me to your very core.
I’m sorry I hurt you beyond believe,
And trust me, I’m not filling with relief.
I'm sorry that you hurt so bad,
And it's my fault, but I’m not sad.
But think about it, will you please,
What would you do,
If you didn’t love me?
Would you pretend and say you care,
Or do what I did, and end it there,
Would you rather me fake it,
Or let you go.
I just can’t explain it.
So you can’t know.
I loved you once,
But not anymore.
I can’t control the stars,
Or the way wind blows,
I’m sorry, but I had to let you go.

Comments

[danzergirl1]

Most of my poems are longer and more desriptive. No need to judge. And thats my own style. I dont think its fair just becuz YOU dont write that way.

[h00drat64]

Way too cliche for my tastes. You didn't describe much of anything or use much figurative language, just merely stated things. 1/5